My opinion is that Technology is better for us because it unifies our world and therefore will gradually lead to advancement in both communications and technology it makes life simpler, and outweighs any sort of human-life without technology and it also allows our population to flourish and grow by allowing us to harvest natural resources, and provides efficient transportation. Establishment of virtual communities which can lead to a communicational advancement. Allows our human population to flourish and grow by allowing us to harvest a larger quantity of natural resources.
I chose this question because I use all different types of technology. Reason why I chose this as my topic because people our ages and even parents want to warn their son or their friends what will happen if you become addicted to technology. Would be that without technology what are we suppose to do?? Technology means everything to the world, without technology we won’t be able to connect with other people from other countries. By using the technology in our present world now, means lots of people are being allowed to be connected with other people and talk about if technology is helpful for our society or not?
The bad sides of technology are, that people are getting addicted to the technology and becoming lazy. Most of our works now days like equations are mostly done by technology and therefore we don’t use our brains very often. Several health concerns come from people our age using technology for entertainment. They spend all their time playing on the computer, or other consoles that they have become unfit and becoming obese. By using technology we haven’t been able to control our emotions. Children now are spending more times in doors then outdoors, and all outside areas are empty for example (the park, football fields)etc...
Technology are putting people without jobs, let’s take a factory for example, a worker has a certain part for his job, and his job is to close all the bottle caps, and he’s doing the job well, but the next day he gets a letter from his company saying that they don’t need his service anymore, and the reason why they don’t want his service anymore it’s not because he’s not educated but its because the company has better and higher technology, like a machine that does the job, ten times faster and easier for the company to sell.
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Ali,
ReplyDeleteThe Topic sentences(main ideas) in Paragraphs 3 & 4 are valid. The grammar needs attention, though.
Paragraph 2 is a bit of a repetition of your introduction. Can you erase this paragraph and follow my suggestions on writing some points about the work the British Council is doing in the UAE. See my comment on 6 Oct. To gain a good grade you must be able to show that you can follow teacher feedback to improve your essay.
Thank you for what you have done so far!